Book Review: The Time Traveler’s Wife by Audrey Niffenegger

I finished The Time Traveler’s Wife (Fantasy 516 pages) by Audrey Niffenegger the other day because it had been recommended by a gentleman in my local writer’s group. Overall, it was better than I was anticipating.

I’d been avoiding reading this book and I definitely haven’t seen the movie, mostly because there was a lot of hype about it and I tend to steer clear of romance novels because I’m not too keen on the whole “happy ending” / “happily ever after” thing, which is the cornerstone for all romance novels. During my most recent residency at Seton Hill University, one of my modules was Selected Elements of Style, taught by Tim Esaias. During that module, we read a selection from The Time Traveler’s Wife and I realized that one of the main characters in the novel, Henry, was a thief. The selection we read piqued my curiosity and I brought it up last week at the first local writer’s group meeting that I’ve been able to attend in a very long time. One of the gentlemen in the group discussed a little bit about the plot and how I might actually like the book since it doesn’t exactly have a happily ever after.

Normally, I’m a very chronological person and this is definitely not a very chronological book. I mean, it is, but it isn’t at the same time. The story is more or less told from Henry’s beginning with Clare and then in reverse with Clare’s beginning with Henry, and we follow the story that way, though it does jump every now and then. The way the time line was done fascinated me because it jumped around in time quite a bit, but that’s to be expected when you’re reading a book with Time Travel in the title. As I read the book, I kept thinking about how the author must have a very complicated timeline in her notes somewhere, showing where everything happens. It was definitely a work of skill and art to decide what kind of order to put each section in and I really admire her ability to tell this story in a cohesive way that didn’t feel disjointed at all.

The concept of this book was also remarkably intriguing. It encouraged me to think more about self-fulfilling prophecies and how time might be more solid than we think. Henry was such an important person all throughout Clare’s past that when she meets Henry for the first time, she basically molds him into the man she remembers and that creates the future for Henry and solidifies the past for Clare. A very interesting paradox.

There was one passage that spoke particularly to me on page 209: “I can’t really comment on this because Mama has never let me read one of her poems, so I say. Well, the garden is beautiful; and she waves the compliment away. Praise means nothing to Mama, she doesn’t believe it. Only criticism can flush her cheeks and catch her attention. If I were to say something disparaging, she would remember it always. There is an awkward pause. I realize that she is waiting for me to leave so she can go back to her writing.”

Overall, I enjoyed this book more than I thought I would and might read it again in the future.

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Writing a Marathon

I completed my first really long run today, the Great Aloha Run, which is 8.15 miles. And I got to thinking when I came home that writing a book is like running a marathon. Everyone starts out all excited and energetic. You’ve got a brand new idea and you can’t wait to see it done! Right around the third or so mile, just over a quarter of the way through the book, you start to realize how much work this might actually be and doubting your ability to make it for the whole 8 miles. You reach the halfway mark and get re-energized, sprinting things out for a little while. Maybe it won’t be so bad after all. Hey, you’ve made it this far, you can make it a little bit longer, right? I mean, there’s that huge crowd cheering for you as you run by and get dumped on by tons of spectators with icy water that feels so wonderful on that really hot day.

You keep running, thinking at any corner, you’ll pass the fifth mile marker and it’s all downhill after that! Heck, you could even see the stadium from there, right?

Wrong. By the time you get to the fifth mile marker, you’re thinking it must be at least the sixth marker because you had to have traveled farther than this. Why aren’t the words flowing as well now that you’ve passed the halfway mark? You already did the hard part, this should be easy, right? Only it’s not. Just like you have to force yourself to put one foot in front of the other and just keep running, you have to force yourself to sit at the keyboard and actually type out every. single. word. And it drags at you and you start to think that this marathon and this book will never be finished. Can’t you just be done now?

Somehow, you keep pushing yourself and finally find the sixth mile marker. You saw the map before you started and keep thinking that you should be able to see the stadium by now, but you can’t. It’s still out of sight. There are few spectators now, fewer people cheering you on, and by mile seven, it’s just you and thousands of other people, struggling to make it to the finish line. You feel crowded, like you’re surrounded by different levels of runners and writers. You get jealous of those who pass you like it’s nothing, only to feel embarrassingly smug as you pass them throwing up on the side of the road or stuck so far behind their plot that they can’t seem to get things going again.

Because, see, you paced yourself correctly and now you really can see the stadium and it’s huge and it’s right there. The end is in sight! All you have to do is get that one last spurt of adrenaline and finish it! Only it’s not. You take one more turn and realize that the finish line is actually on the other side of the stadium. You see people all around you coming to this same conclusion – that you still have half a mile to go and the end is not nearly as close as you thought. Some of them quit and start walking or take a break from their typing, but not you. You’ve come this far and you absolutely, positively MUST make it to the end. It’s RIGHT THERE.

You give it everything you’ve got, running at a dead sprint, passing everyone, typing as fast as you can. Smile big for the camera! You just did something not everyone can do, and you did it well. Not the best mind you, but not the worst by any stretch. And you realize something profound about yourself and what an accomplishment you’ve done!

But you still have to get home. You’re not done yet, even though you passed The End. Now, you have to revise and rewrite. You have to walk your bloody feet home and bloody fingers back to that keyboard. You have to submit your work to agents, editors, and publishers. But it’s worth it. Eventually, you’ll find your way home from the race. Eventually, someone will realize how much your book is worth and publish it.

You just have to keep working. The hard part is done and congratulations for that! But don’t quit. You did something great. Celebrate it, get back to work, and do better next time.

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Borrowing Ideas

At my Wednesday writer’s group last night, we got into a discussion about where we think the written word is heading, both with the publishing world and with the actual form and structure of writing. It was a really good discussion and it almost motivated me to quit my day job and start this really neat idea.

Almost.

I’m hoping at this point that I can stick it out through my job and manage to make it to retirement, but that gets more and more complicated every day. My whole plan so far has been to continue with my current occupation and write on the side until I become a fully retired person, which is still many, many years in the future. I’m hoping to publish about a book a year for the next decade or so while I continue earning days and years towards my future retirement, and then I want to build myself my mountain cabin and be a full-time writer. If I wait until I retire, I will have a fairly solid financial base and I will have earned more adventures and experience than most people in my area.

But I got to thinking during our discussion about the future of the printed book how very sad I would be if all of the houses of books disappeared. It’s truly an awe-inspiring and amazing experience to be able to sit at a table or in a comfy armchair, surrounded by so many ideas and knowledge. It always helps to settle my mind whenever I go to the bookstore or the library. For my first several months in my most recent living area, I would spend almost the whole weekend at my library, doing research, listening to music, reading, writing, and doing other tasks to further my career.

Writing isn’t just about career progression for me, though. It’s something I have to do – I can’t not write. I may not always be writing things that are actual chapters in books, but every word I type or scribble down is a word that I could use somehow in my future. Every conversation is research for writing better dialogue. And I very much like how the pen feels in my hand and how my words look on the page when I’m writing things that are not parts of my many working drafts. I think without writing, it’s a lot easier for me to get lost in my occupation, and since my current bill-paying occupation is not one in which I should look forward to losing myself, this becomes somewhat problematic.

So maybe if I decide to leave my job before retirement, I’ll open a new kind of library. I think what would be a really interesting way to run a library is to have a large collection of books, just like you would find now, and one extra item that is not currently in libraries: a print on demand press. I’ve only recently heard about these in the last year or so and I would guess that they are incredibly expensive. Setting up a print on demand press in a library means that people could come in and work surrounded by the knowledge and imagination of thousands of works, and if they decide they really like the book or books they’re using, they can head over to the print on demand machine and make their own copy. All the proceeds would be split up appropriately between the library, the author, the cover art, and the agent or publisher, but it would be a set amount.

Now I’m going to talk about things I don’t know anything about, and also things which tend to cause me huge headaches in my life (also known as MATH).  In my perfect world, the author or creator of a work gets 65% royalty off every sale. 10% would go to the agent and 10% would go to the editor. Why would I only split between the agent and the editor? Because I think a high-quality editor helps to create a high-quality end product, and I like books that are thoroughly proofread without spelling, grammar, or punctuation issues. I’m not quite sure how I would work in fees for the publisher, since the book would have to have been originally published by someone. So I’m sure there are clauses there somehow. Then 5% would go to the person who did the cover art, and the remaining 10% would go back to the library to help pay the costs of electricity, workers, etc. Again, I am not an economist, nor are math and I usually any sorts of friends at all.

My personally owned library and pseudo book store would also have a large library of eBooks for very reasonable prices, with the same division of sales, even though the cost would be considerably cheaper. For instance, if you were at my library (which I’m going to start calling Fortress from now on) and you wanted to buy a book but you wanted the eBook and not the printed one, the eBook might be $2.99 while the physical book would be $9.99. This means the author makes approximately $1.94 on a $2.99 and $6.49 on a $9.99 book.

It sounds like easy math, but it’ really not my strong suit. Still, you could make those numbers into a lot more if you were selling more than one book a day. And you would know that your money was going to actually fund the writer themselves. I think that writers deserve to be paid for their work, and that offering discounted items is crucial to maintaining the selling of quantity.

There you have my crazy idea. I suspect my idea will be borrowed by someone else, and if that’s the case, I wish you nothing but the best of luck. If you have the time and energy and finances to start this kind of business model right now, I hope you will drop me a line and let me know how it goes.

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Book Review: Chronicles of Prydain by Lloyd Alexander

I actually started and finished the Chronicles of Prydain (Young Adult Fantasy) by Lloyd Alexander almost two weeks ago, and didn’t take the time to write up my reviews until now. I’m going to lump all five books together (The Book of Three, The Black Cauldron, The Castle of Lyr, Taran Wanderer, and The High King) and do my review both as an overarching story for the entire set with a few individual comments. I’m not going to go too in-depth because I don’t want to ruin storylines for anyone who hasn’t read the series. Overall, I enjoyed these books thoroughly and if I didn’t already own them, I would take extra measures to ensure that I did.

I’d read these books as a kid and remembered liking them, so I decided to pick them back up and see if what I remembered was close to my thoughts as an adult. I’m doing this with a lot of books these days, as I try and find the absolute best mix to take with me on my upcoming extended research trip.

The Book of Three originally came out in 1964, which somehow absolutely shocked me. I don’t really know why, but I had expected the series to have come out much later than that. The sheer amount of vision in creating Prydain, all the characters, and story was just amazing. I liked how each book could stand alone, but that there was an over-arching story that attached all of them together. I liked even more how the series revolved around Taran, an Assistant Pig-Keeper. Taran, just like any teenager, dreams of great deeds and heroics, but he also genuinely cares about the important people in his life, including Coll, Dallben, and Hen Wen, the oracular pig. He cares about Hen Wen so much that he chases after her into an unknown forest.

The entire series follows Taran and his search for his place in the world. He doesn’t know who his parents are, or what kind of blood flows through his veins. Even though he didn’t know anything about where he came from, Taran demonstrates throughout the whole series that people should be judged based on their actions and intentions, not based on what station they were born to. As Taran searches for keys to his own heritage, he makes an assortment of true and loyal friends, including the High Prince Lord Gwydion, Gurgi, the Princess Eilonwy, Fflewddur Fflam, and Doli.

There were two moments in the entire series that stuck out with me more than anything else in the books. The first was when Gurgi was trying to convince Taran that it was in his heart to serve a kind and noble master and the second was when Taran learned about his future as a potter. Both of those particular scenes stuck out with me because of the simple power of each one.

Gurgi was definitely my favorite character and I really appreciated the balance of humor, emotion, and high-stakes adventure throughout the series. I don’t know that I’ve ever seen the Disney version of The Black Cauldron, but I read the back of the movie a couple weeks ago and noted that the events listed as the movie synopsis seemed to have very little to do with the book. It felt a little bit like Disney might have tried to cram a good portion of the Chronicles of Prydain into that one cartoon. I think one of my goals for the next couple weeks will be to find and borrow the movie and see how it compares to the book.

Overall, I strongly recommend this series, both for young adult readers and adult readers alike.

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Back in the (writing) saddle

This short research trip has been harder on me than I thought it would be. I thought I would have plenty of time to write and read and get things done, but it just didn’t happen that way. I was lucky if I got about four hours of sleep per night and I have definitely been reminded about the little things that make life bearable like indoor plumbing.

After recovering a bit from everything that’s happened in the past month, I had the opportunity to sit down face to face with someone who read the complete most recent draft of Accept Fire and Blood and brainstorm some of the more entertaining issues with it. I think there are a couple sections that I can add several chapters to in order to increase the horror factor of the book as a whole. The story has the potential to have some genuinely creepy moments, and I seem to skip over them completely. It was great to be able to sit down with someone and actually figure out how I could strengthen the emotional reactions between Ryn and the readers. Right now, I still don’t feel like readers can develop a strong enough emotional attachment to Ryn to care what happens to her. I think if I add in two more chapters, one in Asylum and one before Sunset, that should help create actual bonds between Ryn and the people she interacts with, thus making her a more human and realistic character.

Now that I’m a bit more well-rested, I’m excited about writing again. It’s amusing to me how much I do in fact want to write and how much my day job gets in the way of that. I’ve had over a dozen new ideas for stories pop up in the last month and I’m not entirely certain how many of them I can pursue. But they’re there and they’re hovering in my mind, just waiting for me to catch them with my bug-catching net.

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Book Review: Alice’s Adventures In Wonderland by Lewis Carroll

In my very few free moments in the past month, I picked up and read Alice’s Adventures In Wonderland (Young Adult, 117 pages) by Lewis Carroll. I’ve been meaning to read this for a really long time and I can’t believe that I never did, but now I have. This also means that I’m going through a rather alarming amount of the books on my reading list for my extended research trip – the same research trip that got unexpectedly bumped up.

My first thoughts on reading and completing this story was that it was written rather well for a younger audience. There weren’t too many times where I thought a young adult reader might not have the same kind of thought processes and impatience issues that Alice clearly demonstrates. And I’d have to say that the book is a lot stranger than the Disney version. I’m not really sure why I expected the book to mirror more closely to the Disney cartoon, but it really didn’t. Maybe it’s because the Disney movie had to tie everything more closely together rather than letting the entire set of odd experiences be just a dream, something like a story where a solid villain is needed.

I’m not really sure that the Queen of Hearts qualifies as a villain. I’ve now seen several different movie versions of this story, and none of them were very close to the book, if you look at the book’s overarching story. There was the Scy-fy version of Alice that took place in modern times and made the normal humans into gambling slaves, and the recent 3D version that had Alice facing off against the Jabberwocky to save Wonderland from the Red Queen. In both of these versions, the Mad Hatter becomes some sort of weird heroic character that I don’t think the book had designed. Maybe the movies are all based on Through the Looking Glass? That is also on my list of books to read, so maybe I should finish updating this or add a new listing once I’ve read that as well.

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Writing Popular Fiction residency 5

After a little bit of trouble from work, I was finally able to make it to my fifth and final residency in order to receive my MA in Writing Popular Fiction at Seton Hill University. I ran into several others from the program on the flight and hooked up with  a ride quite conveniently. We arrived at the hotel in enough time to go with the group to grab some food before heading to the orientation session.

It’s good to see everyone again. In tonight’s opening reception, Dr. Wendland, the head of the program, spoke with us a little bit about goals. He asked us to take out a writing stick and something to jot down our notes on regarding the following topics:

1) What is your major goal for this residency? My major goal for the next several days is to read my thesis aloud without any breaks in my reading. I’d like my reading to be as smooth as possible and that I answer any and all questions thoroughly and accurately.

2) What is your writing goal for the next four months? My writing goal for the next four months is to get at least the first half of the first draft of OPoD completed. By first half, I’m thinking probably the first 45,000 to 50,000 words will suit my needs.

3) What is your writing goal for the final manuscript or next big project? My goal for my next big project is to get Accept Fire and Blood fixed up and with at least one publisher every three months until someone decides to pick it up, and also get finish a full first draft of either OPoD or Betray.

I think it’s interesting how Dr. Wendland also spoke with us about how goals have to be attainable and how they have to be realistic and something you have to push yourself to accomplish. I have said that exact same thing several times already. It’s good to hear things like that reiterated by others.

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Goals for 2011

I guess the thing with New Year’s resolutions or goals is that they have to be quantifiable and something I can actually accomplish. The goals I set can’t be easily reachable, though. They have to be things that will force me to push myself.

01. Revise Accept Fire and Blood and submit it to at least one publishing avenue.
02. Read two of the unread books from the shelves per month.
03. Write book reviews for all books I read.
04. Finish the first draft of a new book.
05. Write 2000 words per week.
06. Post here at least once a week with writing-related topics.
07. Keep a word count log of how many words I write or delete a day.
08. Read at least one writing improvement book per month and write a review about it.
09. Submit 5 real queries before the end of the year to agents.
10. Set up a small, online critique group for continuing writing improvments.

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end of 2010

These were my goals for 2010, as well as my comments on how well I succeed at those goals.

01. Finish the first full draft of the book. I did complete the first three drafts of Accept Fire and Blood and will be defending it as my thesis for my last and final residency at SHU in January 2011. Absolute success with this resolution.
02. Read two of the unread books from the shelves per month. I really didn’t do very well on my reading last year. It appears as though I only read six books from the shelves total, which clearly fails the goal of two per month. I have 271 books on the shelf, and of those I have read 176. That’s only about 65% of the books that I own are ones that I have actually read. Non-success on this resolution.
03. Write book reviews for all books I read. I wrote reviews on 33 of the books I read this year, not all of which were from my own shelves. So while I may not have been reading as much as I wanted, I did write reviews on all those books that I did read. Therefore, absolute success with this resolution.
04. Think up, find, or acquire a solid pen name. Clearly I did that since here I am. Absolute success with this resolution.
05. Write 2000 words per week or revise 3 chapters per month of the book. I did really well with this resolution for the first part of the year, and then dropped off around October as my life at work started getting a lot busier. Non-success with this resolution.
06. Have all of my submissions finished and sent to my critique group at least a week before the actual due date. I think I was an absolute failure on this resolution, especially towards the latter part of the year as (again) work became more problematic.
07. Keep a word count log of how many words I write or delete a day. I really did well with this, and have graphs and charts and everything for my daily word counts. Absolute success with this resolution.
08. Attend another Conference or Convention for authors / publishers / agents. Aha! I went to the World Fantasy Convention 2010 in Columbus, Ohio, thus making this resolution another absolute success.
09. Submit 5 real queries before the end of the year to agents. Absolute failure on this resolution, as the only thing I did was submit a full manuscript to one publishing company. But in retrospect, that’s a very rare thing, so I’m going to call that a partial success.
10. Upgrade my computer to start using more writer software. I very much did this, and everything is working quite well. Absolute success on this resolution, as well.

Overall, I’d say I did pretty well with maintaining my 2010 writer goals. I think I will use these as a springboard to make my 2011 writer goals. It’s nice to be able to look back on the year and have proof that I actually did what I intended to do.

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Book Review: the Dragon King trilogy by Stephen R. Lawhead

Last week, I finished reading the Dragon King trilogy, consisting of In the Hall of the Dragon King, the Warlords of Nin, and the Sword and the Flame (Fantasy) by Stephen R. Lawhead. These were books from my childhood and I was curious to see how well I remembered them.

I think the main character, Quentin, spent a lot of time making me vaguely annoyed. He seemed to be a very passive character, always waiting for something to happen and then reacting. In the first book, he’s a simple temple acolyte who isn’t really happy in the life before him. He’s restless and unsettled, but he doesn’t understand why and it never occurs to him to do anything about it. He doesn’t seem to have any interests or hobbies or anything other than what’s he’s told and it was slightly annoying. He jumps at the opportunity to go on a quest and leave the temple lifestyle behind, which is great, but then he’s just dead weight. I did not get the strong religious connotations when I read this as a kid, but I definitely got them reading it as an adult. It’s like being hit in the head with a two-by-four. I do understand that all the stuff that happens is supposed to be a representation of “God’s will”, but it’s rather frustrating that Quentin didn’t take any action on his own and then everything just sort of worked out for him. It felt like he didn’t have to do any work at all in order to succeed with his quest.

The Warlords of Nin was a bit better with Quentin not being quite so passive, but he still had to wait to be handed his mission and the way to save the day on a silver platter. At least in this book, he forged his own sword and wasn’t quite as much of dead weight. Granted, he does show remarkable courage in standing up to the warlord that captures him, and it was interesting to see Esme as a potential strong female character, but she really doesn’t do much. I feel like this entire storyline could have flushed out the characters better and helped make them less passive and annoying.

Which brings me to the Sword and the Flame. How did this guy get to be king? It reminded me a lot of Anakin’s incessant whining from Star Wars episodes one through three. Quentin spends his whole time being moody and unproductive and then he wonders why all of his friends and family aren’t around when he feels like he needs them most. He strikes down a man begging for mercy and wonders why the flame in the sword goes out when the sword is supposed to be used for justice and truth. They made Quentin king because he showed up at the right time with a scary flaming sword and all the bad guys ran away. But even before his son is kidnapped and he kills a man begging for mercy, he demonstrates zero ability to control his emotions. Honestly, I don’t see him as a very worthy king and I was not surprised when the peasants revolted against him. I certainly wouldn’t be keen on supporting a king who doesn’t have the ability to keep a cool head under pressure. It must have taken huge amounts of loyalty for his knights to go charging after the guy who stole the sword when they were probably questioning his leadership skills themselves.

Overall, an entertaining trilogy, but probably one I only need to read every couple decades.

Works cited:
Lawhead, Stephen. In the Hall of the Dragon King. Illinois: Crossway Books, 1989. Original print 1982.
Lawhead, Stephen. The Warlords of Nin. Illinois: Crossway Books, 1989. Original print 1983.
Lawhead, Stephen. The Sword and the Flame. Illinois: Crossway Books, 1989. Original print 1984.

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