Book Review: the Subtle Knife by Philip Pullman

Continuing on after finishing the Golden Compass, I just finished the Subtle Knife (Young Adult Fantasy 326 pages) by Philip Pullman yesterday. I don’t really think I’m going to go too in-depth into it for a variety of reasons, but here’s what I thought.

It’s with this installation in the series that I finally start to see why these books may have been rejected by some for their perceived anti-Christian content. The Subtle Knife has a lot of things going on that go against many normal trends. For instance, this book introduces the character of Will, who commits a murder in the very first scene. Will is only twelve years old and he’s willing to conduct some pretty serious actions to keep his mother safe. I don’t say I disagree, because the character is true to the actions that he would honestly take. We see a young man who loves his mother very much, but is smart enough to realize what will happen to both of them if anyone finds out that she’s not entirely all there.

When Will and Lyra meet, we start to see conflicts of interest between the two, but as readers engrossed in the story and the characters, I think we get frustrated that the two don’t understand how mutually supportive both of their goals are. In some ways, this book is actually slightly aligned with strategy on a massive level. We as the readers are seeing this massive campaign being planned and launched and we’re starting to see some of the moving pieces and how everything fits together, but at the same time, we see how all big events are just a cumulation of a whole bunch of small events revolving around individual people. It’s very difficult to see bigger plans and options when you’re knee-deep in what’s happening to you right at that very minute. I think Pullman achieves a good balance between the two.

It seems to me that there are a lot of adult themes in this story. I’m not entirely comfortable with this being a young adult series, given all the concepts and general big picture kind of stuff that’s going on. If I were looking at this book from a less neutral perspective, I can see how certain people might think that this series is almost telling kids that murder is okay. When Lyra and Will meet, the fact that he’s a murderer actually makes her more inclined to trust him as a companion. I’m not certain what kind of message that sends to any kids who might actually want to take a message out from that. Don’t get me wrong – kids are smart. But at the same time, maybe not all of them are quite as “grown up” as they think they are.

Another thing I noticed was that this book didn’t really have a solid ending at all. It’s clearly part of a much larger work and a book that cannot stand on its own. This is interesting to me because my series is designed the same way. I’m looking at adjusting the end of Accept Fire and Blood to have a more solid and individual ending and I think after reading a book like this that has an absolutely clear non-ending that it might really be a better idea for me to give my book a much less ambiguous ending.

See? You really do learn things about writing when you read 🙂

Overall, I think this is an interesting series, but not one I’m getting emotionally attached to. I’ll see how the final book goes before I give all the rest of my comments.

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Book Review: the Golden Compass by Philip Pullman

I borrowed the Golden Compass (Young Adult Fantasy 399 pages) by Philip Pullman from the library a few days ago. One of the really surprising things to me was how closely the movie followed the book. In this way, I’d have to say that I much prefer to read the book and then watch the movie. I think I get a lot more out of both that way because then I can treat them as two separate entities.

I enjoyed the book and look forward to reading the rest of the books in the series, which I have already borrowed from the library. I’ve found that the library here has a rather good collection of pretty much everything. The interesting part about the copy of the Golden Compass that I borrowed from this library was the caption on the front cover that reads: “Caution! Some people consider these books dangerous! The Golden Compass by Philip Pullman. Knopf, 1995. Objected to because of its perceived anti-Christian viewpoint.”

Wow. Really? I remember there being kind of a stint about this when the movie came out, and I would guess that this is a reason they never did any sequels to the movie, but … I have to wonder, you know? Do people really need to see religion in everything they read? Can’t this just be a story about a girl on a journey to find her friend, Roger, and to deliver the alethiometer to Lord Asriel? Granted, there is a small section where Pullman seems to be quoting the bible (and doesn’t exactly quote it correctly), but other than that, I don’t really see the strong religious pull.

Maybe it’s because I’m not looking for it. Maybe it’s because I like to read stories about characters and have my imagination take me to a variety of different places. Maybe I’m just missing something. What I saw when I read the Golden Compass was a richly imagined world with flying zeppelins, armor wearing polar bears, and cities in the sky. I felt Lyra’s love for Pan and all the humans’ love for their daemons. I felt like Lyra’s motivations to continue on her set task, to go North no matter the cost, as true motivations. So in these ways, I would say the book told a story and told it well.

There were a lot of times in the book where I thought that someone, somewhere could have done a better job of editing. Times where the tense was wrong, or the wrong word was used, but that’s kind of normal with any book.

Overall, I liked the book and I liked the story. I’ve never really been one to delve into politics and religious disputes, so I don’t do the background research or listen to what other people say when they talk about reading. If your religious views are shaken up by the contents of a fantasy story, then in my mind, you probably don’t have very much confidence in your own religious views. But that’s just my opinion.

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Accept Fire and Blood revisions

The revisions for Accept Fire and Blood are moving along, though not as quickly as I had hoped. I’ve got a lot of work that needs to be done and one of the key problems I’m having is how it appears to me as though I’m crossing a variety of normal genre tropes. In the beginning when I first started working on this novel, I anticipated it being classified as Dark Sci-Fantasy. I set the story in the future, so I use technology a lot. There is also an active magical element, where certain individuals can cast spells when given the right equipment. As the story progressed, my mentor and my two critique partners at the time mentioned to me that it appeared as though I was writing horror, since a lot of people were dying and not from natural causes. I checked through my MAWPF manual from Seton Hill University and decided that I should reclassify my novel as horror, even though I’m still keeping those elements of technology and fantasy. And now it appears as though I have to add a new sub-genre of mystery, as I have to drop clues throughout the text to reveal things at appropriate times. I’m really struggling with revealing information and I think that I might want to look at a how-to for mystery writers type of book for one of my next reading assignments.

I guess I can now say that Accept Fire and Blood is a Science Fiction / Fantasy / Horror / Mystery novel. That’s a lot of different rules that I continue to break with my entire story. I’m pretty sure I’ll be able to take care of most of the blatant issues during the revisions phase, but I’m pretty sure that when my novel gets published, there will be a lot of people all across the board who dislike my novel (and eventually the series) just because I break so many rules.

But that’s the story. I, as the author, don’t have nearly as much control over changing the story itself as people would think. Stories and characters set up shop in my head, then they wander off or change the decorations, and then getting them to do things that I want them to do or that I want to happen is much akin to herding cats. I guess I would say that it’s just my job to tell the story in a way that people want to read, but where readers still feel like they can build positive and solid relationships with the characters, maybe even become emotionally attached.

I still have a long ways to go as a writer, but I do feel as though I’m making progress and I hope the revision phase gets easier as I attack the script more forcefully in the coming months.

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Book Review: the Phoenix Transformed by Mercedes Lackey and James Mallory

I actually finished reading the Phoenix Transformed (Fantasy 511 pages) by Mercedes Lackey and James Mallory a couple days ago but did not get a chance to write up my thoughts on it. This was the concluding volume to the Enduring Flame trilogy.

I liked the characters, but I think I got a bit confused sometimes as to which person was the main focus for the POV. This didn’t happen as frequently as with the earlier volumes in this particular series, but it happened often enough where I remembered it. Earlier in the series, I often had difficulty distinguishing between Tiercel and Harrier. It didn’t feel to me as though there were enough differences between the two characters, and that thought process continued until the conclusion of this novel as well. I sometimes felt that both Tiercel and Harrier could be switched for each other at any given time, since I couldn’t really feel the actual personality differences between the two.

I think this trilogy was actually a good series for me to read as a new writer because it showed me some of the difficulties in writing from a 3rd person Point Of View for every single character. I think if there hadn’t been so many different character POVs that I might have been less confused. But as a whole, I know there were times when the POV was Tiercel, Harrier, Shaiara, Ahairan, Bisochim, Razinda, and probably others as well. I understand the need to show the reader the events occurring outside the main character’s screen, but it might have been easier to only stick with a couple different POVs and not switch out so often. I don’t know. I sincerely doubt I could have told this story any better.

The book as a whole was good, but not a quick read. There are positive points and negative points to books that require a lot of effort to read. The positive parts is that I am more likely to remember specifics about the characters, the storyline, the overall concept, and more specific scenes. The only main negative is that once I started reading the book, I knew I had to finish it, but sometimes it felt a little too thick for the mood I was in. I’ve also noticed that with books I read faster that I don’t remember as many of the details of the story as I do with books that I have to pay attention to as I read.

Overall, enjoyable and I will probably read it again in the future.

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Book Review: Protector of the Small by Tamora Pierce

Continuing with my celebration of the end of my third term at SHU, I spent my weekend reading the rest of the Protector of the Small series by Tamora Pierce, which included Page (Young Adult Fantasy 245 pages), Squire (Young Adult Fantasy 380 pages), and Lady Knight (Young Adult Fantasy 409 pages).

This is one of those times where I enjoyed the stories, even though I knew how pretty much every one was going to end. The good guys win, the bad guys are defeated and the world moves on. I like that this short series did not end with Kel married off and having children. I liked very much that it actually ended with Kel riding off to a complicated post, filled with the people she was sworn to protect. We’ve seen that being a commander of any forces in Tortall during this period of war with the Scanrans would be difficult and we know what kind of things Kel will face as she returns to her post. It’s not a typical “happily ever after” ending, but it is a happy ending because the reader knows that Kel will be having many more adventures, whether they’re written about or not. Kel is fulfilling her purpose as a Knight and that is how she wants to spend her days.

Starting the second book in the series, Page, late on Friday night, I was already engrossed in the land of Tartall so it was a little less interesting to have so many pages reiterate to me of things I already knew. I know that when books are written, the author does not expect the readers to have just completed a reading marathon by reading all the books in order one right after another. I also know that sometimes, I include stuff from chapter to chapter that I probably don’t need to, but it’s a way I use to remind myself of some of the key things that are going on in the story. I’d definitely say that writing the story is much more difficult than reading a story. This summation happens several times through the last three books in the series. Although, it did motivate me to want to read the Song of the Lioness Quartet again, just to refresh my mind on a lot of the things that happened there. I have not yet read the Immortals Quartet, but I think I shall definitely have to look into them. If that series is as good as the other two, I’m sure it will make for another good weekend of reading at some point in the future.

Protector of the Small was a good storyline. After all the absolutely terrible things I do to my characters in my stories, it’s very nice to be able to sit down comfortably in another writer’s world and believe in Knights and happy endings again.

Works cited:
Pierce, Tamora. Page. New York: Laurel-Leaf, 2007. Original print 2000.
Pierce, Tamora. Squire. New York: Random House, Inc., 2001.
Pierce, Tamora. Lady Knight. New York: Random House, Inc., 2002.

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Book Review: First Test by Tamora Pierce

I just completed my assignments for my third term in SHU’s Writing Popular Fiction MA program. To celebrate not only the end of the term, but also the actual beginning of the revision process, I went to the library and borrowed a few books. One of which I just started and finished, which was First Test (Young Adult Fantasy 240 pages) by Tamora Pierce.

This is one of the really amusing things about me as a writer. Technically, I write horror. I’m sure at some point, I will post my thesis defense, which will occur in January 2011 if everything goes well. I’m certain that I will discuss why I believe that I write horror and what makes Accept Fire and Blood fall into that genre. The truth is, I had never read a horror book before January 2010. This past term, I read a variety of horror novels, short stories, and essays as part of my homework assignments.

The truth, though, is that I don’t really like reading horror. I don’t really like watching it, either.

So when I get the opportunity at the end of the term to read whatever I want to help me unwind from a very stressful several months, I choose to read books that are going to make me feel better about the world I live in, to give me hope that there are still good people out there who want to do the right thing.

It took me longer than I would have liked to slip back into Pierce‘s writing style, but once I did, I found myself easily engrossed in the story. It only took me several hours to get through the book, and I desperately want to crack open the next in the Protector of the Small series, Page, but it’s been a long and rough couple weeks.

I think what I like about Pierce‘s stories is that they clearly demonstrate that success in life comes not from how other people view you, but in how hard you work and how much you are willing to sacrifice to achieve your own goals, no matter how ridiculous they may seem to others. Kel doesn’t have an easy time at all getting the boys to accept her, but she never makes concessions and she never finds excuses. What she does find is the ability, desire, and self-discipline to find solutions to her problems instead of wallowing in self-righteous indignation. I think this is what makes me like characters like Kel so much, is that there’s nothing really special about her and she doesn’t really have any cool special powers. She’s just a remarkably dedicated young girl who knows her calling and pursues it.

I also like the arcs and how the kittens and the spidren in the beginning helps Kel with the spidren attack at the end of the book. I also like how Kel’s continued fear of heights has a real and valid reason and how Wyldon really was doing everything he could to make sure she was trained fairly.

I enjoyed this book very much, especially as a welcome break from everything else that’s been going on lately.

Works cited: Pierce, Tamora. First Test. New York: Bluefire, 2012. Original print 1997.

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Book Review: Ain’t She Sweet by Susan Elizabeth Phillips

I went to the local library on 17 April 2010 and borrowed Ain’t She Sweet (Romance 383 pages) by Susan Elizabeth Phillips. As I had nothing else to do in my new condo with no furnishings, I started and finished the book within a couple hours. There are a lot of reasons I don’t read romance, but this is the required text for the SHU residency in June.

One of the primary reasons I don’t read romance is because everyone seems to think that in order to have a happy ending, the main characters have to get married and have kids. I don’t mind the marriage part, but I do mind the part where the kids have to be there in order for everyone to be happy. I know that the requirement in order for the book to be considered romance is to have a happy ending, but it makes the story all the more predictable when you absolutely know that the female main lead will wind up with the darkly attractive former teacher and current writer. Since I already have patience issues, this made it even more annoying for me because I didn’t really care what else was going on. I just wanted the book to be over. Granted, this was not nearly as painful of a reading as In the Woods by Tana French which was my first required text for SHU in January 2009.

The part that I found the most amusing was that the story required the intervention of a 13 year old girl in order for all the adults to start talking. This is actually fairly true. Sometimes, we as the adults, are fairly stupid and a lot more immature than the next generation that we are supposed to be teaching.

I will say that I liked that this romance book was not as graphically heavy with the intimate scenes as a lot of the other romance style books. And I liked that Sugar Beth was willing to do so much to help Delilah with her situation. Sugar Beth went through a lot and I did like that she was a strong character who was willing to do whatever it took to take care of someone she easily could have brushed off. It felt a lot like Sugar Beth might have actually been a little too predictable. I knew she was going to reform and everyone was going to forgive her and then they would all be the very bestest of best friends.

I’m not sure if I think the characters really would or really would not talk like they did in the book. I thought all of the names were really funny.  I’m not usually one of those people who will go through a book and do a validity check on absolutely everything. I don’t know if the location was real, or if it was made up, as well as the names and the general atmospherics. Having only briefly travelled through the south occasionally, I couldn’t really get a good mental image in my mind of the area, or the decorations, or kind of anything.

Overall, I wish I could ban having to read romance from my itinerary, but then I wouldn’t be very well rounded. The book wasn’t terrible, it really isn’t my style, though.

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Accept Fire and Blood

Accept Fire and Blood, the first book in my intended series Wildlands, took me just over a year of solid writing to complete the first draft. The story still has a long way to go before I’m ready to submit query letters to agents, editors, or publishers, but I’m hoping to have that finished sometime soon. Here’s a little bit about the story:

Ryn was a special consultant for the government in the distant future until bitten by a kanima, one of the most powerful of the supernatural creatures. Unable to work and concerned for her future, Ryn escaped the confines of the Six Cities and transformed for the first time amidst the rubble of her crashed AVec. Pursued by the government, cold-creating demons, and a human serial killer with magical abilities, Ryn must choose who to trust when everyone wants her new power at the cost of her life.

The initial draft is currently 77,027 words, but I suspect the revision process will lengthen that a great deal. There are a lot of things I need to fix, but I continue to look forward to the revision process.

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